what a way to write off one of the harem.... makes me feel spiteful. Maybe ALLL the girls should just be written off if he's just gonna be that callous about puppy love. lol (I mean we all know the otp is arthur and elf girl)
I suppose getting written off is for the best... Honestly with another art style, this story and maturity rating could've turned into some lewd Greek hero story with a harem in suit.
the rate of this story, I hear the mention of hags--- KILL THE HAGS!
aah.... so thats how the collab was done. first story and art was probably just done by 1001 and the new story and art is by BWaT. (not blended as i originally thought)
the story is VERY slow paced... questions take forever to get answered and then more questions come about only to -at this moment-... yet to be answered. Plot is interesting, but when it hits it's stride, the result is kinda... almost melodramatic? (not over the top, just a feeling of... meh)
give it a C+, B-
Wait... so after reading the chapters n seeing the comments be disappointed cus they wanted the other guy to lactate...
but now...
could they....
IS THIS A "POR QUE NO LOS DOS" SITUATION???
currrently read 1/4 of the way... this clearly must be a manhwa adaptation from a light novel cus the characters have a decent amount of depth... the male lead isnt a knight n shining armor and the female lead isnt as meek as she looks... she even intends to Mulan him up... (i'd say Shang him up but no one would know who that is without Mulan)
i know having an appealing cover draws readers but who knew clickbait extended this far... Honestly, I dont mind there's no 3P, there's not even an affair with the 2nd guy... its just a tease. I do kinda wish there was... ANY affair past a kiss... especially if they're gonna make one of the guys the typical, rich n powerful but also in school.
The cover is by the same artist so it could be that the blond charcter would arive later.
lol if it wasnt clear, I've already read the raws... i've seen the 2nd guy... goose egg
i really want a poly story thanks for telling me sooner
Thanks for the info, I hate 3p/love triangles, so now I'll read it
welp its a hentai anime now... go look it up
Only three episodes so far
uh.. link
Lol I watched it on coolmic but you have to pay
....screw the royal family???? ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND? Imagine saying that to THE QUEEN!? not only would you get the look of shame from the ultra bourgeoisie but the audacity to give away her belongings to someone else.
They Kinda suck though o i can understand his nonchalant attitude ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I mean they king was trying to take away his dragon by force even though he already told them they’re bonded so I’ll take it as karma
le sigh.... the story wasnt bad -at first-.... but its slowly going down the typical cliches... overpowered protagonists that just get thrown cannon fodder like this old lady.
honestly, if i were to rewrite parts, I would've had the mother succumb to her illness and make use of her as a legacy (as in she can still be a mystery that'll slowly be solved as the main character becomes a better martial artist)
dunno what i'd do with the father, he does come across as a protagonist guy, but he's a bit of a lump of a guy.... maybe id give him some story like he had a well known family but it was cursed and he was too young to know details. ... something instead of making him a side protagonist thats ALSO entering the murim world.
the brother i would've changed into a more corrupted character cus of the sect's doing.
the grandfather I would've had him not stick with the protagonist because now it's just leeway to showoff... which is ok, but there's no drama.(and i'd of course kill him off because we don't need an OP character to overshadow the main character... plus it gives drama for the main character)
personally for me this is really good so far but, killing of parents are huge cliches so are evil siblings. i also like the mc he isnt a dumbass like most shounen mcs
well the mom should've died cus honestly it seems more inevitable when she's been suffering THAT long. I know she became worse after the first child, but when they mentioned she had a second child, I was kinda giving them the side eye. THEN her father shows up.... to not even fix her sooner? like he knows she's ailing... instead he goes on a job with his grandson... wtf.
the dad.... well, honestly if he was killed off, its more to just free the main character, but honestly I didnt consider what to do with him cus he comes across TOOO shonen-y for a dad/side character.
as for the brother, i can acknowledge the brother becoming evil trope... but long lost sibling turned protagonist are oldies but goodies imo.
I just want to say, the parent/mentor dying to create a legacy trope is so overused in both western and eastern stories that there are actually a ton of jokes on it. It just becomes kinda meh at some point.
For example, disney, starwars parents are mostly dead, multiple chinese, japanese and korean stories likes their parents dead too for character motivations too. Like oh, your dead father/mother/guardian was actually someone important!! Oh, here you go, avenge/prove innocence/complete your family's legacy!!!
well... it's not like im saying she would the reason for anything because of her death... I'm just saying she's already on the door AND gave birth to TWO children. honestly, her dying could be the end of it, but since she DOES have some importance in the world of martial arts (more than their dad so far) then ofc her sons would learn more about her though it. (i mean if your parent and their family were trained bakers and you started getting into baking, then ofc you're gonna learn stuff about them from the world of baking... which is what im referring to)
tl;dr she's still from a well reknown family dead or alive and that was the author's decision... im just saying she was within reason already gonna die... but didn't