
It would been interesting if everything isn't falling in the palm of his hand plus why is he telling us everything like we aren't that stupid, you can show it with hints or visually like it really suprised me that goblins were bad guys not bc it's a big plot twist but bc they never showed anything plus the way they talk feel so robot like. So basically I wasted 10 minutes of my life to read this
Lmao poor Shelly will lose it if that happens like I wouldn't be surprised if she dumps him
If he does agree to do tht she lowkey should dump him
I agree, like that's just messed up