Read this from the start in one go and I just need some plot development. It's cute but... the closest we got to anything is the conversation about murder and the land for the... shrine (I think). This is chapter seventy, there should have been, like, waaaay more by now plot wise.
I do think that there's potential to the story, but the plot need to actually start. Also at this point I'm trying to understand if there is any reason she won't talk to her parents about it. I mean, what does she have to lose? Yes they might bot believe her but for now she just wasted five years doing nothing. Talk to your parants sis.
Yes, it's cute. But it's getting old and it's a shame, cause I do enjoy the characters and I think the plot has planty of potantial. Hope the future chapters will get better!
Sorry, I accidentally disliked. I meant to like.
Just re-read this. What a piece of art!<': So beautiful and heartwarming (and breaking in case of Nora;====;). The characters, the plot, the art, the everything. There are a few works on this website that can reach to this kind of level. I honestly don't know what to say about this to make my love for this any more clear but I'm going to re-read this regularly and cry every time :'))))))
I'm not sure the author really thought out about the lead's mission, it's just vauge and unneccecery most of the time, just to be thrown in again as a plot point.
Yes, I'm sure it's going to be important later but for now it just isn't. Maybe I missed something but IDK, as an undercover the fl seemes reather oblivious. She didn't study the place she got into, didn't try to make any contacts with any other people than the duke (really 'tried' there XD) for cover or anything and she didn't make the smallest effort to gather information. I don't care for her to fail but I do for her to at leat try. I actually really like the story and characters are great, but... the base of this entire thing is unimportant for over twenty episodes at this point ;_;
Yeah, at some point I thought "so what was her mission again?" May as well work earnestly as the Duke got some peculiar business here and there, I think that would make a more focused and possibly more satisfying read.
Yeah, I kind of wished she just had was sent by her family or something. The mission is meh.
ofcoz the author will show the interesting first . wat do u expect want to serious story first . ofcoz will be not interesting this is romance story they will falling inlove first .
That doesn't mean the main base to the plot is not important XD Also the story would be better with that. If an author is doing something because it's "interesting" rather than benefiting the plot, that's lousy writing. And I'm pretty sure that's not what the author meant to do here. They probably got into the story without thinking ahead, which is unfortunate.
i already read in newtoki . and by the end of the episode, they'll have a little bit of conflict and serious matter. at the same time, the LINDSAYAN will start to love FIAN because it saves LINDSAYAN’s life (i guess). the author will
#－.－) show in the end ep .
I never got to reading this since the comment section freaked me out but wow, that's actually pretty good. Feel kinda robbed XD
The main lead is actually quite impressive and her past life straggles weren't glossed over like nothing (which happens a lot). I also like the way the romance went since it's twisted and really interesting - although it could have been better. Ruve's development is a little sketchy and it would have been great if it wasn't just because she changed herself (kinda toxic there but well, we had it worse), but I get this couple. Would have loved if they had more development and emphasis on her fears by this point. I just feel like one day she was terrified and the next not anymore. It's a little more nuanced than that. But whatever it's too late for that.
Yes Carein is best boi but we all knew he is not the one.
...Also I just need for Allen to get the fuck out he is creepy and unnecessary and I hate him thanks bye.
I love where this is going and in a desperate need of an update. So good. Solid characters, Decent plot and a great MC which is not too smart/too dumb for her own good (although cursing out a royalty is not the best idea but hey, I had a great time) I just hope the spacing and rhythm of the story improve (yes it was fun but in this pacing we'll reach the climax in chapter 1000). This has a huge potential to be a treasure :'D
If she stops calling him father soon I will RIOT.
ML is daddy for life
I think it's really good for 4 chapters. Yes, the seme could have gotten more development but honestly? That was good. So good I want to re-read this 5 seconds after finishing. Didn't expected it to be that good.
That wasnt a regular bad boy story, everything was cohisive and thought out. I love the thought placed into the characters and the plot development was on point. I would have loved more but I think we can leave that at that. Great overall. I do think that a long story would have let us dive into the characters more but I don't know, this has a charm I can't even explain. Great.
Agreed plus what how much development could actually be expected in 4 chapters
I think all of us need to accept that Paul and the fl are not happening:'))))) I really wish they would have but the cover... oh well. The emperor has potential. Like, way less, but he does:')
Ok so maybe I'm trying to cheer myself up.
either way I am hyped for this, I think there is a cute dynamic with the over simplified lead and that the emperor can grow into a more appealing character (I'm not on the hate bandwagon, more on the 'I-don't-really-care' one) BECAUSE he has a greeeeeeeat fl and the author seems to notice that. Also, I LOVE how uninterested the fl is in him. I hope it's here to stay for a long long time.
Hehe yes we all love us some Paul