the art, format, story-telling, phasing, character development etc.
everything is magnificent so I was surprised when it's tag as webtoon, but it turns out it was only published in Korea.
though it has a repetitive pattern. it actually has a story that can get you into it but damn, there's basically sex in every each of the chapters, it's surprisingly becoming a turn off for the story.
I know what you mean! Stories like this are fine in 1-2 volumes, but when it goes on this long, I feel like I want to see more story development instead of 15 pages of just sex again.
So agree its basically 1 sex for each chapter
I hate Iriya.
He's rude and blunt and he's the first to look Riku with disgust which continued until just recently and he probably won't help Riku that much if it isn't for Keiki.
He was also portrayed as like a "teacher" to Riku so he can be worthy of Keiku, but what's there to be taught? aside from being aware of your surroundings and be cautious from other alphas? Riku doesn't need to be taught on how to live as an Omega too, since he can live or behave the way he wants anyway.
Riku already has proven to be excellent not just in academic but also in leadership even before all of this.
anyway, the way the mother was confronted was satisfying even if the translation was epileptic.
there is something about this that makes it realistic yet unrealistic, it's so unique and beautiful.
and it's all thanks to the brilliant writing.
the arts, topics, characters, objects etc. everything is simply colorful and beautiful.
I also want to point out the difference how open tokyo people are compare to the ones in seoul, lmao can't be more accurate.
still felt bad he's been taken advantage of left and right and no matter when or where you looks he's still basically a replacement.
Ken deserve much more.
So it is safe to assume that his brother was secretly worrying for him when they were young in the that one panel?
I really hate his brother but for such a beautiful manga, I don't want it to be ruined due to my annoyance towards a horrible character.
Which 1 is it? Bcs I don't notice them
when Minoru was stroking Yutaka's head when he got a fever.
(Its a stretch but)
Yutaka initially thought it was his big brother's hand, so I just assumed that his big brother was always discreetly taking care of him before. he even immediately thought it may be his big brother's hand so I think it's safe to think his big brother was always doing that whenever he got sick before.
Oh yeah I was confused too by this scene, i thought it was the ml hand
is such a default selfishness in every individual.
but i just wanna share my perspective on this since the plot heavily leans on that part, I'm now 6 months away from my last relationship, I'm self employed etc. but I feel so relaxed right now knowing someone ain't expecting or demanding something from me. so it just surprised me that the story heavily emphasized on that part. but then again, let's not forget the characters' circumstances.
also I still feel really bad about the ex.
imagine being suppressed by your own fucking lover for being you?
A fast phased story yet written flawlessly.
that's rare and on the top of that; the main antagonist get what he truly deserved. a rare occurrence since a lot of BL Mangakas would just let shitty people get away.
Toraaaa you fuck!
why is no one has confronted or at least tell Tora that hes a piece of shit.
Good Plot & Direction but with poor to adequate execution.
the art is what you'd expect from a BL Manhwa & characters are okay with no infuriating characters (cheers to that!)
I said poor execution as there's a lot of scenes and chapters where it could really hit your emotions but they did a poor job at doing it.
agreed. I also was left confused as to what the point was of his brother being in the hospital. It was this huge deal at the beginning of the story but in the end he just woke up all of a sudden and the first panel we see of him he is looking fine like he was never in the hospital in the first place. ig I was just expecting more from this specific plot point. The author could have taken out this plot point and the story would have remained the same...
agreed, otherwise the creator could've made the brother's situation worse which I think would make the MC more pitiful and would make the readers feel more emotions from that plot.
the MC's 'Waiting Arc' was wasted too as it's a turning point for the story but they did a poor job at it. most of the panels at this arc was just the MC's Square Thoughts babbling around. could've been better to show us a literal scenes right?
and the scene where the MC and ML sitting on the sofa; I was eagerly waiting for the MC to break tears. well he did cried but it was quite unsatisfying as it's supposed to be a heavy scene then a seconds later we'll just see them fucking...
the arts actually pretty good for a ~90 chapter manhwa imo the style and quality didnt change over the long course and when you have to release a chapter every week you cant exactly draw in higher quality while meeting deadlines
I agree, I never get it when people say it’s their fav bl of all time. Like did we read the same story (〜￣△￣)〜
yeah, the facial & anatomy drawings are great. however, there are chapters where 3D objects are overblown and the backgrounds are just lifeless templates though I think they did a good job at concealing it sometimes. but I guess, I'm just really used to Mangas where backgrounds, artifacts & objects are mostly hand-drawn.
yea some manga have really good art but they take a long time to release