CREDIBLE CRITIC May 21, 2025 9:07 pm

Lost potential.

The scriptwriting is simply unclear or inconsistent. there's a lot of supposed serious scenes but how can I take it seriously when they toss unserious script everywhere. It's ruining a lot of the flow.

Is this Comedy? If it is, then they did a horrible job. If it's not then why constantly put in a immaturish jokes and scripts.

CREDIBLE CRITIC May 19, 2025 8:05 pm

But the plot is unclear. like why is it turning into action/spy shit suddenly.

Something about how the story develop makes me uncomfortable for a reason. I cannot exactly say it's lacking but I'm still looking for something. The characters and settings are just so perfect for some instense love triangles or something.

The synopsis, characters, art & formatting are great though.

    Iunia May 22, 2025 9:47 am

    Literally same. I thought I had the wrong manga for a hot sec in the beginning

CREDIBLE CRITIC May 1, 2025 2:33 am

It's a story of failure that blooms a wonderful ending.

Another work that proves nothing can top a Shounen-Ai when it's paired with Horror. Japanese Story Telling is truly something else.

Yall may think Hayato's decision was infuriating, because it is. That's the reality. Modern Japan is still considered homophobic and conservative. Now think how it is for gay couples centuries ago (considering they're all from prominent clans) I actually applaud they even manage to squeeze that topic on to the story.

This ain't a webtoon where all male characters are gay. Y'all gotta appreciate realism sometimes.

    LWT May 1, 2025 2:26 am

    AGREED! Man it's so refreshing read I'm gonna cry it's so good(/TДT)/

    Nothing's May 1, 2025 2:37 am

    I don't think most of them aren't mad about hayato decision but more mad about the reason is hayato leave touma without telling anything only to send him letter through servant and he didn't even tell anything touma about reason why he got married so ofc it's reasonable for touma to feel betrayed

    CREDIBLE CRITIC May 1, 2025 2:42 am
    I don't think most of them aren't mad about hayato decision but more mad about the reason is hayato leave touma without telling anything only to send him letter through servant and he didn't even tell anything ... Nothing's

    Yeah, all of his decision still falls with my statement.

    I mean yes, It's due to him being a coward somehow. But ultimately, He couldn't afford to raise anymore suspicion, considering her fiance's family are basically the early members of Yakuzas lol.

    What he thought was for Touma safety was wrong, it's plain tragedy that birth this wonderful plot.

    shw98jsi2nw32h2uie3 May 1, 2025 5:01 am

    Ily cause people here lack so much common sense it's pissing me off

    MagicalReader May 1, 2025 7:29 am
    Yeah, all of his decision still falls with my statement.I mean yes, It's due to him being a coward somehow. But ultimately, He couldn't afford to raise anymore suspicion, considering her fiance's family are bas... CREDIBLE CRITIC

    Early Yazuka was something not to be messed with, especially a beloved daughter of one. They probably would had to leave Japan, go into hiding and get rid of their names, or double suicide. Because of the power they held.

CREDIBLE CRITIC April 22, 2025 7:02 pm

How are yall accepting the art.

Actually, the whole thing. everything is just so poorly done.

This ought to be rejected.

CREDIBLE CRITIC April 22, 2025 3:33 pm

the headache inducing art, the nonsensical logic from characters, the weird narration, the incomplete world building paired with poor translatation/scan and the immaturish script.

This is Lobotomy.

CREDIBLE CRITIC April 13, 2025 1:35 am

I know it's focused on their mental issues.

They've been SUFFERING especially the MC, and it seem to me that what they did is not enough.

Puking on the root cause is not enough.They should've get that man cancelled and publicly humiliated.

CREDIBLE CRITIC April 11, 2025 1:02 am

I love the synopsis, especially the misunderstanding. But the plot are in the edge of being horribly executed.

This seem rushed. There's fast phasing but the happenings on this one feels almost instantaneous--leaving a gap in between major story points.

Horrible scripts also started appearing at the second half of the first season.

Just hoping the writing won't get worse at Season 2

    Itiswhatitis April 11, 2025 2:10 am

    They literally nerfed the novel bruh i had high hopes

    CREDIBLE CRITIC April 13, 2025 2:44 am
    They literally nerfed the novel bruh i had high hopes Itiswhatitis

    Possibly so the story can accomodate the artist...

    Great book ruined by incapable artist smh.

CREDIBLE CRITIC April 1, 2025 9:05 am

this is the very example of not giving.

the art, script, plot, setting is simply not delivering.

go girl give us nothing.

CREDIBLE CRITIC March 28, 2025 5:03 am

i already find guideverse silly but in ch67 a dragon showed up...

like I get its fantasy but it's so out of place considering the whole setting and even the aesthetic.

and what's the point of having a harem from the start just for the MC to end up with one.

CREDIBLE CRITIC March 26, 2025 9:38 pm

Similar to Game of Thrones, shit is so well done but ultimately lead to disappointment.

The ending is so abruptly unsatisfying. It would be perfect if they hang that bitch up.

That evil bitch incarnate shouldn't lived at all.

She was portrayed as cunning and evil all from the start, naturally the readers will feel growing hatred towards her. But no, the writer decided it's better to leave her unscathed despite how bitch she is.

That is just so fucking disappointing. What was the creator thinking?

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