The Author balancing the story between heavy drama then in between he would squeeze in a comedy script.
Not sure what to feel about that when the situation is soo deep.
The Length and flow are perfect for a Webtoon. Not unnecessary long like most webtoons are but also not too short, while the plot is straight forward, it felt a little lacking from small details.
And the ending was anticlimactic! Yeah they live happily ever after but it could've been much better!
They could've used Do Hyun's hatred towards Heesung for a better ending phase or extend the chapters where Jaeyeon kept rejecting Hessung for more drama.
It's good but there's an imbalance with the MC and the plot. It's about gambling yeah but there are times where it's all about cards cards & cards which I find boring and is overshadowing the story and the MC.
The scripts are not that well thought too as each panels has the MC basically narrating everything. too much actually.
There isn't much special but the writing was professionally done which is rare for BL Manhwas and thats why I think people loved this.
Many people love and rate it highly due to the side couple. The main couple comes off as frustrating and dull.
yo the fact that the rating actually dropped from 9.3 to 9.2 because of the MAIN COUPLE'S side stories lol
I hear you
The main couple is unbearable, and 'their' side stories are even more cringe-worthy.
IJBOL
Everything is so vague and each characters are full of flaws. The Mystery genre was done awfully.
This would've been a great manhwa if they bother hiring a team of proofreader and a proper scriptwriter. smh.
There's an MC but it feels the three of them are the main characters, he just happen to be the bottom.
and what monk would fricking say that shit? lmao
Also, Can we praise how the author stick to manually drawing the tigers instead of relying on 3D shits?
But you know whats annoying?
Even in fiction ppl can't leave wild animals alone ffs.
This has to be one of the most headache inducing ART in Manhwa ever.
Poorly placed background, Poorly blurred shits; like whats with the blurr it doesn't add dramatic effect anyway?
The overly used paint brush used for the pheromones. Then almost every panel are filled with this cheap-ass glare filter.
It easily obliterate all other vampire bls despite being so short.
Also OPEN THE SCHOOLS!!!
yall need to up yall reading comprehensions or whatever.
They have this unique style of art and actually have colors and identity.
Formats are also done well.
Now, 98% of BL Manhwas all have this generic character designs and artists are TOO reliant in 3D shits.
What I also love about this work is how perfectly long it is. It's just 30+ chapters yet it gets the job done.
Many creators nowadays will abruptly rush their work or will extend every chapter and panels as unnecessary as possible.