The synopsis and plot was okay but the flow and writing are straight up Janky.
The dramatisation from Seojin are too much and unreasonable. It is redundant and the dialogue are poorly written, making it almost cringey. There are just better ways to portray his brokenheart, just present him as an sadboi69emo boi at this point lmao.
The art is meh, it's what you'd expect from your average manhwa. 3D objects here and there etc etc. The characters design are poor executions of an already unearthly beauty standards.
I like the angst though.
the story and plot itself isn't new but the ART.
I think the generic masculine sharped eye seme x big eyed small uke or 'manhwa look' that koreans have been obsessed for years now are nailed by this japanese mangaka.
i mean just look it...!
>literally narrates everything
>grab his stomach
>looks at mcdonals
>stare at his food like an idiot
this chapter is killing me. bitch I feel like reading something equal to Dora
Not sure what to feel about Hirono, He being an outgoing kid lead to such a fortunate event for Hime but after that it’s all just cowardice. It’s even more pitiful when you really take a look at Hime’s background.
While it’s a great that Hime see Hiro as his source of strength and Hiro loved him, looking from realistic perspective; I won’t be surprised if Hirono will leave him in the future.
I mean that’s what I see in his character when you compare it to ppl irl.
The Portrayal, Plot, Characters, Art & Overall Execution just felt like it’s trying hard, too hard actually.
Reminds me of kids trying to act mature or when kids try to get into adult conversations.
The general idea of the dream thingy synopsis was okay and had some potential but the fact that this took more half a decade without any improvement from writing, execution to art is just plain sad. Like 8 years just for this? (But if this kept the creator fed then.. okay)
Despite being a side character, he’s basically the strongest omega ever to exist in manhwa lmao
Imagine divorcing your shitty alpha and not giving in??
All the other omegas could neverrrrr-
this is peak mid.
not bad nor good.
18+ but seems to be written similarly to 12 years olds fairytale books.
just something to keep you engage all throughout so not to drop.
i must say I was disappointed though, as I have seen a lot of people saying it's their fave? ???
It's like soju, not the finest alcohol but it hits the spot
Sorry but soju is ass, cvm is easier to swallow.
Hey I get you but sometimes it's nice to read refreshing things, their relationship wasn't anything special compared to other stories but it's still adorable.. and it's nice to read especially after reading something like jinx for example.
[I'm bias since I'm a sucker for happy endings and fluff]
You've never had a good drinking session with your buddies and it shows
That is true because I don’t drink
We shaming sober ppl now?
Then how tf do you know soju is ass unless you've tried it ? HUH ? MF
I just stopped drinking mid college?
The taste just reminds me of those children’s syrup when sick idk. Anyway I ain't drinking again so no point arguing over alcohol’s taste lmao.
The irony of me not remembering typing this Even though I was completely sober yesterday
It wasn't even from a novel, isn't it?
I bet this whole thing was just a repulsive decision from the creator.
The synopsis in general has a potential but the whole thing lacks enthusiasm from it's creator who clearly doesn't know what do to.
From the execution, next-chapter decision, art everything was obviously made just to reach the deadline.
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Hahaha you're not wrong