
boi looking like he lives in the gym doing routine nonstop 7 days a week and is basically as docile as a sheep.
I know and love characters that looks contradictory with their personality but this not it. look at those waist and tiddies it's almost comical.
Actually the whole thing is ridiculous, it's like the creator intentionally made the story like that to induce annoyance, but surely they're not that dumb.... or are they?

One of the few well thought BL Manhwas, The flow may felt rushed but actually not. as it is only being straight forward, they only show what's critically necessary to the plot.
The Art is okay but not generic, they don't overly design the characters which is an unwritten rule in Manhwas.
The hate the ML is receiving is superfluous.
I would argue that his redemption arc is actually one of the satisfying among the rapist MLs in Manhwas. He already gave everything up for the MCs sake, risking his life multiple times. plus, he's truly a good natured person at heart who cares for his people which is rare as a lot of rapist MLs in other manhwas are just selfish jerk.
Chen, despite what he's done, he's still not better for the MC. He can give his love to MC but not his loyalty or life. He's ready to do everything for the Ming Emperor, even killing the MC (Chen quite literally said that)

take a break and plan the script, scene and plot carefully.
seriously this is getting weird. It's probably heading to the point where they'll just release whatever first comes to their mind just to meet deadlines and reach the ending at the earliest possible.

don't shame me for this but the idea of sleeping with your ex's dad is... hihihi
idk how to word this but family affair synopsis really is a great dramatic plot if done well and in serious manner.
I believe most of Manhwa artist are overworked, I read somewhere that if a mangaka is struggling to meet deadlines, a manhwa creator is struggling to make ends meet.
The main POV should be focus on Jun instead of Yoonseul's. As a reader it would certainly leave a bitter taste when the MC is two faced trashy, especially for this kind of genre of BL.
Kinda like they're normalizing it? or justifying it?
People kept saying Yoonseul's a wreck after realizing his feeling but where?? there's no any significant remorse from him. all he did was to aggressively approach Jun without being considerate to the whole situation immediately, acting like a spoiled child who can't be stopped until he gets what he wants.
He's also basically gaslighting Jun.
truee. the only thing Seul can do to be "redeemable" is to respect Jun's wishes, not to overstep his boundaries