Obviously there are two.
I wish to see the full First Time Line because thats the shit!
You want sadness, misunderstanding, betrayal, tragedy, angst and trigger warning contents etc. it all seem to happen in the First Time Line.
God I wish the author would show it to us fully and not just some flashbacks
whatever software these BL Creator's been using they should've switch or at least be more creative. I only got back to reading Manhwas for merely recently and I've got to say, that fvcking 3D skycraper is so overused like.
anyway okay to cringey read, it's an easy to swallow BL Manhwa perfect for shallow readers.
that mother surely is not mothering.
Abandoned his family, put his son into a mental institute with an specific order not to treat him properly...
I'm surprised the MC & ML aren't that angry with her, that woman deserves a public humiliation at the very least and a complete restraining order with the MC.
the ML's a lil bit annoying too, his pride lead the uke to harm himself, if he just say 'I love you' and explain the situation honestly in the first place, the uke wouldn't have to suffer that much.
it's my first BL manhwa where I hate the MC more than the ML or at least dislike
I really really felt bad for the MC, his suffering is unmatched but deep in my brain is saying that half of all those things are because of his pride. All the ML wanted was to genuinely love him and tbh his words might hurt the MC's pride but he also know he didn't mean those ffs.
anyway this is a very well thought and written one! so yeah 8/10
the MC's naivety that lead to misunderstanding actually made some sense but the author failed to execute the MC's circumstances and his emotions correctly in the story which resulted to poor projection of the events or what's happening.
The MC's background actually is sad and the ML is his 'salvation' or at least would be the key for his mental improvement but then again due to poor execution, the story's main direction became unclear or ambiguous.
the author can't seem to decide which genre the story's direction would be. So in the end it resulted to it being tedious or flat.
some scenes are also cringey. Are they serious with 'kongkong' that's actually quite annoying, i imagine the author writing this while laughing and not taking the story seriously. I would get it if the whole thing was a unserious comedy but no.
kongkong nickname could slso be temporary until it is born but if that's really the case it's another outright evidence of poor writing, because it's so unclear.
An explosion of mixed feelings for all the characters. We have Anger and Sympathy for the both of them. The MC ultimately paid the price at the end which I guess could count as ML's Karma for all his cruelty.
but I guess most manhwa reader's are not ready for a tragic end, so now they proceed to show the ML's POV.
Interesting, nonetheless. Curious what's next or if there's any difference.
im sorry unrelated to the story but that chair looks hideous
Lmfao and they said "it looks comfortable" DUDE YOU SERIOUS
this is not a matter of liking or hating anymore the ML's already a psycho.
it's not about defending the ML or liking him. it's like hating on Patrick bateman as a character because he's a psycho.
Jennie has the best portrayal of mental regression overtime, her story despite a tragic one, is written realistically. It actually has a potential to be a standalone plot for a movie.
Though I must admit I'm very satisfied with the ML, I mean he got to beat all the shitty minor characters no? he's basically a satisfying trash of a character.
mid art which heavily relied on overblown 3D rendering from backgrounds to even as small as credit card...
mid characters. The MC's not a saint nor he got any ill intent. Yahwi's a trash. Cain's real name is Canis Lupus... like wtf fr?
the story's execution was weird. there's a lot of illogical responses from the characters. one example was when Jooin think that Cain having a 'plan' to get him was bad.
anyway, dropped.
OK. Bye.
saved you from wasting your time!
really wanted to like this coz of the plot but the writing feels immaturish..
the dialogue feels really off. while the character design is good the art in general is flawed with a bunch of 3D objects being inconsistently used. The characters literal action are sometimes illustrated weird too, they look like some stiff mannequin at some panels.
Anyway we're only at 20sh chapter and theres so much room for improvement so let's hope for that.