
It seems to be a nice story, but the main character is jumping to 'I love him' way too quickly.
If there was some more moments to show change of emotion, observing and whatnot then I think it would fit, but as is...it seems more like he's clinging onto the one person he can see clearly rather than anything else. Makes me rather sad. ╮( T▽T)╭

Okay, I am more than confused now.
Hakushima was first disgusted with the advances and now he's very much like a bitch in heat all of a sudden, without any further developement between the two other than a few teenage talk moments?
That feels very off and unfitting based on previous reactions.
And how exactly does this go after chapter 5? Is it Seno in Hakushima's body now? And if so...how the heck will that go and fit into the current story?
This story is really all over the place. And I'm not sure if it'll get any better now.

spoiler ahead...
u didnt get the story if u write somthing like that. its about seno ! he never switched bodys. he was so in love he wanted at least feel once beeing loved by natsuki . like natsuki was always in love with hakushima, seno was always in love with natsuki . i was already wondering when i first saw him that he lied about beeing hakushima. its rly sad when u think about it. but he has his happy end bc natsuki finally understand who he loves and who loves him.

I liked how it started out, but then the artworks somehow became worse the further I read (seriously, some of those faces are just hideous and/or hilarious to look at).
I get the plot: Masochist falls in love and gets dominated and so on. But honestly, it felt rushed and off in many ways. The uke was interesting but the seme was nothing more than a jerk from what was shown. And there were too many things that were left out to save pannels (aka, that lubing up scene was damn important but was entirely left out).
As nice as the basic plot is...the execution isn't good.
Even the errors in translation don't feel awkward since it fits the lacking plot and art issues to some extend.
Not really recommended unless you don't mind flaws and scrapped scenes, dialogue and lack of reactions/emotions displayed.

Honestly agreed I too felt like it was rushed . So much more could of been added and this story could of even been extended slightly ifghe author approached it from he right angle.
I also kinna felt like the UK's should of at least fought back and be hesitant instead of just submitting. Technically that was rape of what just happened. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

Well, based on his behavior and train of thought he fell for the seme right off the bat without realizing and how the sex happened and the uke having a positive reaction I heavily asume he's actually a masochist. So that probably turned him on more than it bothered him. X'D
But yeah, this could have been a really amazing story if it was done a bit differently here and there and had more chapters. Too bad authors never do a re-work of past stories, that would be nice for this one. ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

This is making me feel momma feels for some reason...darn it. ;v;
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/boku_no_hero_academia/bt/boku-no-hero-academia/182/pg-16/

We got much progress in such a short chapter, holy fuck. X'D
I'm not really worried about Asami and our boy, since they were not that far off the take of point (theoretically at least), they could be washed ashore somewhere and do a bit of survival~. Would give them the chance to have Akihito teach Asami a few things maybe.
I didn't expect Fei to get into bed with Mikhail until the next chapter tho, so that was really a surprise. It was a given he would use that to get Mikhail to agree, but still. Fast developement there.
Now the question is...did Mikhail even speak the truth? Maybe HE's the one behind everything, seeing as he knew Fei was infatuated with Asami and didn't give a damn about Mikhail despite the obvious flirts. I hope he's not behind all that, because I would like to see him become an ally at some point maybe. (Still shipping Yoh and Fei tho, so I'm not rooting for Mikhail in that department, sorry~.)

Girl I'm with u! I'm shipping yoh with fei! But I need a different set of their story in a different manga cuz fei is taking too much of taka and asa time.

"Still shipping Yoh and Fei tho, so I'm not rooting for Mikhail in that department, sorry~."
Love triangle- best drama/plot device ever.

i am neither for or against Feilong x Mikhail but i think that it is more pratiqual (well if you can control your feelings) that Feilong x Yoh is together rather Feilong x Mikhail, what i want to say it is Yoh works and lives in the same country as Feilong, Mikhail is in Russia, thus if they are together, they will see each other not many often and a remote relation is not easy.
if i have to choose i would prefer Yoh (yes i like Yoh, he seems so kind, so soft).
somewhere if Mikhail had not stolen those goods, that group would not have attacked the penthouse and not pursued Asami and Aki (look that situation in the copter, it is so dangerous). no on second thought i do not like Mikhail, Yoh is the best.

Good fics of MikhixFei? Please?

Search on lj, there are 2 I liked really much: Typhoon and Russian roulette

Look for Cruel Intentions, it's the best MxF fanfic

Yes but it's not really a short chapter. It's over 30 pages. It's just the way it was uploaded that makes it seem short.

The pacing of this was really off, so much so that it felt like a recap of something bigger and longer.
Not only were parts missing that would have made the switch from one scene or topic to another smooth and/or better, but some situations just escalated out of nowhere to get to the next part of the plot. Which isn't good.
The art is good and the overall story is very interesting, but how it was put on paper in the end wasn't good.
Even the sex scene was kind of random and it would have worked better to entirely erase it instead of putting the shown scene in there.
All in all it's very lacking and not pleasant to read. (Which is a shame since the story is interesting and the characters are as well.)
It's a nice read for some, but if you're looking for good story writing and execution of that...this isn't for you, most likely.

I seriously do not appreciate the feels I'm feeling after Gentle's monologue and conversation with Midoriya. ( ; -;)
I really, very much, hope Gentle will come back at some point. He would be a great help for Midoriya in combat and more than anything...he deserves to be a hero in my eyes. He's such a loving person and deserves a second chance.

deku gave him actually, gentle remembered why we wanted to be a hero when he fought with deku and he was happy i think when he out the from jail, he wont be villain and happy with that little girl :) thanks to deku<333

and uh if i was villain and if someone has to stop me, i prefer someone like deku someone who is a real hero well gentle wasnt like a real villain but he will find a real happiness i believe that thats why i love deku
Anyone else read this as our dear hero's name at first? XD
'you All Might' instead of 'you all might'.
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/boku_no_hero_academia/bt/boku-no-hero-academia/184/pg-3/
they said "all might" and I was like "WHERE IS HE?" (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I can't believe we get a full page of endeavor but no All Might... (︶︿︶)