fuck the mls and their associates. im not torturing myself by keeping up with it this, but im surprised how both mls gets worse and overall plain boring because their sole personality trait is just… being a rapist? why is this all they have going for them… and poor mc is treated as pawn to both an experiment and forever date rape drug
THIS IS COMING FROM SOMEONE WHOS READ WAY WORSE, I LIKE TWISTED HORRIBLE STORIES!! in the beginning i thought it was funny how wooju fell for the “ill teach you how to be good at sex, so please fall for me” storyline. but how did we go from that to permanently changing someone’s biology because it doesn’t fit your standards and it’s entertaining? professor and jiheon kill yourselves
IM FUCKING CRYING AT HIS LOVE LIFE first both of his crushes start dating each other, and then his newest aspiration is his actual biological family??? it wasn’t some cousins by marriage but truly blood related??!! they had some good tension too… i felt his heartbreak, i thought he’d finally found the one
ending the series before the hottest yaoi old man sex scene possible is fucking sick and twisted we got eternally edged and abandoned. my big boobied and moody king was about to give us the riding of the century… how am i supposed to move on peacefully??
mc described how he was basically a huge heart throb with no romantic struggles. but then rationalizing keeping a kid with the WORST father possible is so funny to me. kill that parasite hoe ?? he had options, and decided to have the devils spawn!! and the only real compliment towards the guy is finding him the most attractive man, but then going through with the most life changing decision is crazy work (btw this is a joke)
do not take this serious… i like the story, their dynamic is magnetic + has so much potential. i looked at this from a realistic lens just for fun. nothing serious or real criticism about the story, the huge appeal to omegaverse besides the sex or die aspect is the babies okay i get it
this chapter was well written for the mere terrifying aspect of relationships between sex workers and clients. even if its intention was only to be goon material- the loud power dynamics and straight up ignorance to non-consensual acts are realistic to a fault
with dan making everything known from his body to his words he doesn’t want this. yet jk thinking he did want it because dan suggested it or enjoyed it during coercion… this is genuinely how a lot of rapists feel or justify their acts. im interested in this story don’t get me wrong, but i view it as more of a horror mockumentary > a romance lmao
this isn’t fanfiction or an indie artist trying to make ends meet. they work under contract, receive stable pay, and are legally protected… it’s NORMAL to discuss the plot, characters, and everything else about the story itself in a negative or positive light? you guys act like ten year olds who’ve never consumed entertainment made for profit
we are supposed to engage with the entire work of fiction, not only praise everything about it. isn’t this common sense by now? or are there too many minors / straight laced naive idiots here
mc seems like a straight self insert. he has all the traits of a fmc who is good at everything, unaware of their beauty, and self deprecating to a fault. he accepts all the hardships of this guild, even though he made it very known from the beginning he wanted an easy life with no harassment from s-class espers
im lost on his characterization tbh, and his love/attraction does feel forced. i was hoping he’d pull away from the guild, knowing he’s not loved or appreciated unconditionally for who he is. but he’s just overly forgiving and welcoming of the difficulties they force on him…
they were having a cutesy lovey dovey moment until that blond bitch walked in!! im fearing for his hole tbh because describing his dick as a SWORD… RUN!! HIS BODY IS NOT THE SAME HE WILL DIE
also the lore drop is fitting into place, that family’s twisted attraction to blond girlish twinks is terrifying. i have a feeling he’ll inform the duke about this pretty fairy
he hurt the ml first and will go on a justified violent rampage IKTR!!!! i can’t imagine how angering it is to hear people in this position of power all collectively agreeing to cut the limbs off of your loved one…
id be kinda mad if i planned a whole proposal trip for my future husband and he asked me to marry first ??? why are you trying to steal my spotlight… and giving the most vulnerable, heart aching vows fuck you
their love and bond is so strong it made yamadera awaken a primal part of himself to save mc?? why can’t they leave this poor old man alone
im scared for the upcoming chapters because i hope he doesn’t accidentally turn blood thirsty. its not easy being a killing machine with the mind of a kid, and then having the hunger/impulse of one
i cannot believe we went from having a tragic, interesting story about two people caught up in an awful scheme, to the ml not even caring about the situation at all and only obsessing over poor mc
why is his sole drive to make tae submit and want to stay a sex slave? is ml so one dimensional that they’ll only make him care about sexual violence against the person he “loves”, and not even try to understand tae’s perspective + how tae was the only person genuinely on his side before realizing they both got played??
how is he reaping what he sowed when this mf was drugged and constantly raped, but then found solace in one person he was forced to abandon. the whole choking incident was self harm and then he locked his memories because a psycho had control over him ?? raymond is responsible for taking advantage of a young kid, but it’s not deserving of this degree of punishment
don’t mind psychological stories, but some of you guys don’t know how to properly weigh consequences with actions. just say you want to see raymond tortured instead of using excuses…
they keep bashing on this for being a “wattpad story” as if that’s a solid excuse… this trope has existed FOREVER. hes not some shallow bad boy and she’s not a helpless mc with zero personality. he’s working behind the scenes to change her life for the better, chasing after her because they have a mysterious past. meanwhile she used to be blind to all the abuse, mistreatment, and belittling. this type of dynamic hasn’t been explored much, but her reactions to everything has been so realistic??? yea its stereotypical to have a struggling mc and an overly protective dark haird ml, but this story hasn’t given into traditional narratives
the characters are dimensional and we are now starting to see their complexities. haesoo is really relatable for women who’ve experienced toxic first loves, who don’t realize they can do better because of his constant control. and it’s almost like therapy seeing someone save her + show her the truth without shaming and leaving her
with rape in yaoi i get it’s all fiction and mostly used as a cheap, but common catalyst for romance/plot. however this is a rare instance of a story addressing the after effects and admitting the incident was life changing. instead of getting treated like a minor inconvenience, its good how his trauma is getting explored and also not brushed off instantly? there wasn’t some cosmic loving reaction seeing the ml again. mc was angry, hurt, and triggered by his presence and in this current state still effected by it. it’s praiseworthy to include the long term psychological damage of rape
he does not do it for me… you’re telling me he never liked og villainess and sold his little sister to a violent kingdom? but the second the mc starts acting like a mother he starts treating her like a human and with basic decency wtf!? his newfound fondness for her feels so forced and shallow, talk about supporting a mary sue trope
and even though this started off interesting, im a little disappointed in her character direction. she’s knowledgeable about people’s emotions or overall reading the room but when it comes to the romance she’s suddenly thinking nothing of it at all. i think she has depth, but they’re not exploring it in a way that fits the narrative. when i think of all the things that happened to her, i get confused why she’s so focused on noah only and didn’t seem to have any goals outside of calling off her engagement. the only reason why she even found out about the lake she appeared in is because noah told her so. but if it wasn’t for that, what exactly was her plan to go back home or what were her other priorities?
people clocking or hating on her isn’t misogyny… both sides lacked emotionally and didn’t communicate their feelings maturely. it’s a disservice to make either one of them the only victim, BUT i understand if readers don’t like the ex or the ml since we all have our own experiences with people that relate to them
he wasn’t telling her about his new relationship to blame her for being a girl or lessen his own responsibility ?? he mentioned it since she asked and he wanted to finally be honest with her. his entire complex = refusing to be open with people because of his upbringing... her issue with him was that she felt like the only one putting effort into the relationship and loved him one sidedly when that wasn’t the case… he’s literally trying to apologize now and clear the air, except he should’ve been more tactful about it. she’s now taking his vulnerability the wrong way, because she’s still hurt and i don’t blame her for wanting to take her frustration out on him!! she doesn’t know this new jinhyeong
this author is crazy talented not only did i find their chemistry too good, but the humor didn’t even take away from the eroticism. the quirkiness and sex/sexual tension blend perfectly??
honestly an omega like mc deserves three or more boyfriends, he’s so beautiful