Idk you guys... I found the flow of the story good! I'm so tired of leads that are too much of a goody two shoes and a villain that are always smarter than the leads. It's a refreshing thing to see stupid villains for me!
It's like running up to someone and being like, "What if I slept with your boyfriend? How would you feel about that?!!!" And they gape in horror. Then you run off saying, "I'm sorry! Forget what I said."
Wow, that's nasty, Nomandsland. November is talking about a fictional character. You're actually talking that way to a real person. Not cool. SeekingSanity
Wow, that's nasty, Nomandsland. November is talking about a fictional character. You're actually talking that way to a real person. Not cool. SeekingSanity
Idk you guys... I found the flow of the story good! I'm so tired of leads that are too much of a goody two shoes and a villain that are always smarter than the leads. It's a refreshing thing to see stupid villains for me!