I don't see why people complain about the art. The proportions are fine, the shading look good, and there're plenty of details; it's beautiful. I don't understand why people see this as weird; not every drawing style should look like anime-esque, and I also like the rougher looking men, and I think other should too if they love someone like "Ajussy" from Dangerous Convenience Store.
I can see that point. I don't know if I'm not noticing it as much because I have to focus to see and understand the critique. This might be a matter of not-as-experienced illustrator; looking at mangaupdate, it seems to be their only work, so I think that's at least somewhat excusable.
And like the person above me, I think everything else is fine; it's definitely not the worse case of facial flatness because we have the first season of "The Abyss" with literal paper white faces.
I don't know if I'm getting the correct info, and while I don't know about the novel, I think the manhwa, emphasis on the manhwa, got dropped, or is at least on hiatus, because the artist departed from the series.
And reddit says this is the author's other serialized manhwa; there's another one called 일단 결혼부터 (Once Married/Let's Get Married First) with a different artist, but that artist also departed. So, I feel like maybe it's for the better because either the author is really hot and cold to work with, or contracts artists in a really shady way.
Personally, although I know how much more work it would've been for the artist, but I would've wanted a second round "I can't forget your body" type of reencounters with a reveal of who he decided as a boyfriend.
Although, I do find the attorney the most stable. From my personal favorites, the gangster is too polarizing, the twins are based in the US (so MC would have to move, which he can't because he's still attending uni), and the straight man might've not been interested in romance other than for the body. I also like the lifeguard, and I can't find a reason why not to date him other than beaches being a seasonal job, so ultimately the attorney is a great pick.











If you're like me and watched the anime first, take this as a measure to prevent confusion, read from the beginning because there's so many narrative and story line details along with characters present in one medium but not the other that'll cause some confusion.