
Why is this story all over the place ? Are there missing pages or the flow of the story is just like that?

I understood what was going on in the story but I think its pacing is really weird . There's no proper flow between each scene.Like I'll be reading one scene ,then once it's done suddenly the next scene starts without explanation of how the characters ended up in that scene ,which makes it harder to immerse myself into the story. The story itself is not hard to understand but coz of the bad pacing its hard to get attached to the story or characters. Another problem is that I cant invest myself in the romance between the characters coz the ML likes the FL out of nowhere. I dont know if its coz she looks like his love interest in the manga or if it's just lazy writing . Overall I feel the pacing makes the story and characters feel flat. I havent seen the drama but since you say that the manghwa is more detailed then I have low expectations for it considering how lackluster this manghwa is.I'm not sure if I explained my point properly but anyways I really appreciate you for typing out so much to explain the story to me.

I'm in chapter 58, it's kinda getting hard for me to continue reading this coz I find yuki really annoying. I find her to be really selfish and inconsiderate towards naruse. She gets angry if he's open about his feelings and then gets angry if he keeps it to himself. Hes always the one putting effort into their relationship. Especially the bit where she says that he won even without her is so selfish , what does she expect from him.. Honestly, if I was naruse I would have left her coz no one would have the patience to deal with her . Lowkey hoping that he breaks up with her so that she realises that the way she treats him needs to change. But I dont think that'll happen. So can anyone tell whether her character improves or does she remain the same?

i understand where you’re coming from since her actions are very repetitive, but i think since most of the time when naruse is speaking his mind, it has underlying perverted comments (meaning he’s just toying with her) so she gets pissed off. and when he doesn’t talk it’s usually cause he’s pouting about something that she couldn’t control (ie: talking to that black haired dude behind his back but they met as a coincidence or something) . i agree with you about yuki not contributing with the relationship (cause she’s not one to do as much skinship), but ig in her own way she’s showing it? she grew up bottling her feelings so she doesn’t know how to show that she actually cares for naruse. dw tho, over time she begins to talk him and shout very cringey (but cute) words to him- n do the sexc sec :)) the game thing as well is pretty selfish of her n she realizes that- but idk her brain is one of a kind ._. all in all her character does improve, she tries to speak her mind, shows a lot of cute sides to naruse and tries to do things for him (treks all over the city to find this one present that naruse wanted for his birthday)- but they still do petty fights etc. idk, her getting very insecure and bottling her feelings gets really tiring but it’s probably cause she’s a massive tsundere and it’s a typical shoujo trope where they always misunderstand -_-

I hate it when the main couple get into a fight and the FL is so flustered by it that she becomes absent minded and clumsy. Do authors think that girls can't keep their personal feelings and work separately? Girls are not so emotional that they become totally incapable of doing anything when they are sad. Plots like this make me believe that the author doesn't even know 1 thing about girls or people in general.

Why tf cant this bitch properly reject the 2nd lead instead of sitting there and getting flustered .

If such a pretty boi like him confesses to me I'll be pretty flustered too but she did reject him and if you're thinking then why is she relying on him and staying with him making it look like she's not rejecting him clearly... well she was just stalked you know she's really scared and I know how scary that is and at least the creepo didn't manage to grab her...
Am I the only one who wants to see the 2 teachers end up together?