
Am I the only one who thinks the story is kinda messy??? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

The art is really pretty, but the story kind of sucks, ngl.
We're supposed to believe that the ML is falling for the FL for... some reason? Why? All she does is snap at her new little sister and yell at her whenever she touches her. Even with her ability to "know some peoples' pasts and futures" she hasn't done anything particularly interesting or insightful.
All of the characters are so dull and one-dimensional that I find it difficult to care enough to root for any of them.

Is it just me or is Lesian stupid?? Idk. Her decisions are quite off for me especially if she knows the future. ESPECIALLY SHE ALREADY KNOWS THE REVENGE SIDE OF THE STORY!!! WHERE EVERYTHING GOES ACCORDING TO PLAN BECAUSE THE MC IS USING THE PAST INFO ON HER CURRENT LIFE TO MAKE IT BETTER! ヽ(`Д´)ノ
Even if it's the first life. She should be able to get some better ways and choices from the story.
And why is she arguing and making the crown prince an enemy??? She should make a deal with him or something to get rid of the Marquis!! Is she facking reckless just because the crown prince needs her??? ( ̄∇ ̄")
" An enemy of my enemy is a potential ally "
AND!!! I know she's strong and everything but geezes! She do like to fight and do shit for nothing!!! She should be planning shit to live! For future stuff, right?! Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)
But ofc. It's ok if the MC wants to drink and have a relax moments from time to time but can you plzzz use a robe or change yourself a little so people won't recognize you??? Do you love to get the attention so much??? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
It's bad for the people to know the crown princess is a person who likes to eat in a bar and loves to fight and beat up drank people. Even though they were in the wrong and everything. It's still not good for the image and the crown prince would definitely not like it.
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Idk man. If she really is desperate to live. She should have thought better solution and choices in life. She's lucky to meet with potential allies while doing shit. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

I agree with you, I'm not bashing this story but you see this is a good example of an artist who tries to put every color in a single painting.
I felt that the story was rushed we didn't even see her adjust to her new life! She was all like "oh hey i just transmigrated into a novel let's see how this goes" i understand that this is fiction and that a lot of other stories do this as well but it doesn't mean it's any less frustrating how fast they adapt to becoming a part of a fictional world.
And what's with the black haired dude? Isn't he a duke? As far as my knowledge about the middle ages goes, dukes are aristocrats who manage their dukedoms fiefs and are supposedly busy as all hell, all we see him do is follow the crown prince like some personal guard and stalk the fm!
And how fast can a person fall in love? we're only at 10 chapters and he's already ready to help her break the engagement with the crown prince who's supposedly his friend (?), bruh i understand your interest in her since she's not your typical noble lady but that's waaay too fast, to the point where you follow her around! A duke! How free are you?!
Another trope the author tried to put in the manhua is the "bffs with my maid" i don't know about others but their friendship looks clishe and uninteresting ,again, felt too rushed.
And well it just doesn't have that...spark! Yknow the one that makes your heart flutter at their friendship? A good example of that would be Yuri and Melissa from beware of the villainess or even Yona and Melissa! Istg their friendship is so refreshing.
Actually the whole story is rushed! We didn't even get to see her "exercise" her swordsmanship and she's already so skilled! Yes I'm not blind I've see those certificates in the first chap and how she's apparently a kendo champion but this is still a new body so there's no muscle memory or anything, it's a new body of a noble lady who had been abused mentally and physically so it should logically be weak.
And the thing with the crown prince and the marquis is just a mess to be honest, she's just complicating things more, and the crown prince is also unreasonable, why would he want to marry her if he already has someone else he loves? Yes i got that he's doing this to expose the scheme of the marquis and whatnot but that still doesn't make any sense! You're the mf crown prince! If you really wanted to stop that abusive a$$hole you would be able to to do it easily by using your position and your power!
What else? Ah yes the thing about her going to a local bar with those clothes irked me so much i had to stop reading, now why would you do that? I completely agree with you she should have considered her status and her position before doing something so stupid and reckless! Rumors would start flying about how she frequents bars and beats people up AND meet up with men in the middle of the night!
I feel like the author had so many ideas but didn't exactly know how include them in the manhua and that's why it feels rushed and piled up with sooo many isekai tropes and empty characters.
In any case, I'll still follow this manhua and see where it's going, who knows maybe it'll become better.
And again this is not me bashing or hating the manhua or the author, I'm just giving a review criticizing what i didn't like in the story.
No shits man but I'm not liking this. I pity the other siblings! Like they're trying their best to have love from their father but that mf is playing favorites.
And MC doesn't give a shit. She only cares for those who cares her. I understand that but bruh! Plz pity the other children y'all!
HOW CAN THE SIBLINGS LOVE YOU IF YOU R SUCH A WHORE!
JUST EVEN THINK TO FIND A WAY TO BE FRIENDS WITH THEM SO YOU HAVE MORE ALLIES! ಥ_ಥ I CANT HANDLE THIS!
THIS IS THAT TYPE OF MANHWA THAT THE EXTRAS AND INNOCENT WAS GETTING INVOLVED AND HAVING A BAD EXPERIENCE CUZ THE MC IS MAKING WAY TO FIND HER OWN HAPPINESS!
i agree with everything u said up until the whore part . she’s 3 how is she a whore
LMAOAOAAO well she did get betrayed by the only humans she trusted so that probs plays a part in why she’s like that ?
Sorry, wrong choice of word. But she really has a quite bad attitude. And shes not 3. Her body is but she's 500+