ReviewRaptor's manga / #wtf just happened?(326)

This feels like there's pannels, pages or even whole chapters missing. WTF? One chapter they are both zero interested in each other, next the guy gets randomly horny at the other and then they suddenly fuck with both being interested/wanting it like they had just a falling-in-love arc successfully finished? The writing and pacing is bad. It honestly feels like someone had specific scenes in mind and just somewhat managed to string them together so they can slap a story/comic title onto it. But there's really more to writing than that...sadly this work doesn't manage to do that. Not gonna waste my time after flying up to ch 14. It's not coherrent enough to bother reading for the story and the sex scenes not detailed enough to skip through it for smut-only purposes. Hard pass.

Had hopes for this but the first chapter is already showing a lackluster and mediocre execution, at best I mean. It has a really 14-years-old-tumblr-author feel to it based on how the dialogue is written and how characters reason and react. It's not cringey but just...really making me loose all interest in anything that's happening o9r could be happening. (Doesn't seem to be the translations fault, btw.) It's fine to leave out some stuff but if you magically teleport a character and have her jump into a sentence that warrants a question/reaction from the bad guys being shown first then...it really feels like you have no fucking idea what you're doing. All in all it feels like a cliche clusterfuck of shoujo story parts being taken by a kid and squiched into something that's supposed to be a story. All while the pacing is so fast and happenings so abrupt that you're just sitting there all like: WTF!? oh, okay...? What? How? erhm...yeah. It's not interesting, it's not enjoyable and the art can't safe it either. Hard pass. (And probably the first to accomplish that in one chapter, I believe.)

FFS, more and more I really wish people would NOT do promo chapters. Because this shit gets less and less cohesive every time I see a new one. At least make it SOMEWHAT like a fluent comic page, or straight up just a collection of random pannels that don't pretend to be connected in a cohesive way for the first few pannels. This shit's annoying as all hell. From the VERY little info this gives, I'm gonna look at it. but damn, could you have done a much better job at trying to make it more interesting (by just it being cohesive btw). If it wasn't for the art tho, I'd probably have hard-passed this shit...so lucky that that and the ganster genre aspect is there to save it...

The potential beastiality aside...I love this plot idea SO damn much! I do kinda hope they explore the thought of teaching how horrible riding methods are given that the MC is a horse and can give the horse's perspective quite easily (horrible riding methods as in; bits being painful as fuck, spurs and whips also, etc.). It would be a great opportunity to teach readers to be less stuck in old, dusty ways of the equestrian world. Even IF this is just supposed to be porn at the end of the day. XD I like the artstyle so far and it seems like the author DOES know quite a bit about horses and likes them. So I'm looking forward how the MC will protray the knowledge of horses here. And well, obviously how this otherworldly encounter turns into a goddamn yaoi of all things. TF. o_O I would have honestly loved this without the yaoi tag. I've seen my fair share of furry porn and have grown numb to nearly all of it, but I think if this was just an average bromance story between a horse with human brain and a military commander...I'd be totally addicted to this and enjoy it for as long as One Piece and co. runs. Animal MCs are underappreciated af. <3

This makes as much sense as sprinkling gold dust over horseshit and saying bone apple tea. WTF did i waste my time for?? And WTF is the artist wasting their talent on this for?? So many questions, such an abyssmal chance to recieve any answers. Spare yourself the read. There's literally nothing here. No story, no character, half a fucking maybe but that's about it. Skip through it for the pretty art, but don't bother looking for anything else. Seriously.

It's like someone made a comic based on a re-telling of a re-telling of a rough plot description...it's hardly a cohesive story and hence really isn't fun or interesting when reading. The plot might be interesting, but the execution butchered it to the point of me really growing disinterested by the first few chapters. The male characters are nice to look at but that's about the only positive thing I can say. Oh, and the male lead doesn't seem like a yandere. i don't think the author knows what that character type even is to be honest...