ReviewRaptor's manga / #wtf just happened?(326)

Wow, just wow. This felt like some fucked up, far-from-reality fetish fuckfest that a 14 year old tumblr user wrote. The little story that is there is butchered and hardly made into a cohesive story, it's choppy and jump-cuttish as all hell and even makes you think that entire chapters are missing. Some things are mentioned but not explained, others are just yeeted into your face and you have to accept them then and there, because around the next corner is another pile of shit waiting to be flung into your face. This is really just a fetish, self-insert I'm sure. Because even IF you are into these kinda forceful relationship dynamics...you cannot enjoy them because the author made zero effort to make ANY character likable or understandable in any way. They hardly have a personality and what they do have is trash and remains so throughout. This story, if you wanna call it that, throws happenings at you without stringing them together properly, all so (seemingly to me anyway) that the next cringey fuck scene can start. This is trash. And the type i seldom see on here with this level of average, early 2000-type of artworks. It's not worth reading. Spare yourself the waste of time. Not even as wanking material, mind you. There is nothing of worth to be found here from start to finish.

While the plot is interesting, again, like so often: The execution is very lacking. It's incredibly rushed, it skips scenes that are important and immerse the reader or just bring the characters alive, just so it can quickly go to the screwing around scenes. Good for jack-off material maybe, but this is clearly not trying to be smut but a fully fleshed out story...which it falls short on in every way. The art is decent and the plot interesting, but I'll probably only skim through pages to enjoy the art. It's not worth reading actively, so to speak. As sad as that is. :/

The idea was nice but...the execution falls short on all ends. It comes across as VERY messy and somewhat halfassed here and there. It's too jump cut-y one time and the other it just drags on too long with something. It's another one of those stories that feel like a comic based off of a re-telling by someone who read a story some time ago or glanced over a script. And I'm honestly starting to get tired of seeing this be done. It's so damn easy to avoid...please, just DON'T make a comic if you can't manage cohesive or fluent story telling. It just makes it a chore to read unless you maybe don't know what good or bad writing is (which I know this website is full of, but that's no excuse). Hard pass due to the obnoxious flow (if you wanna call it that) and just messy execution. Also, very predictable and the plot is minimal as is so we can already tell there'll be lots of arcs with needles drama just so the story can stretch on and on...