chocobuun created a topic of Die Love

So I saw the spoiler saying that the mc woke up from a dream. But they’re confused as to which story is the real world.

I think since the other story directly mentions the mc playing a zombie video game with a character that looks like the ml, that Kwak ha-jun observation diary is the real world/original. It sounds to me that since mc got to know kwak hajun, he dreamed of them being part of the game world and made up his own scenario. It even adds info like the ml not getting along with his dad irl, in this story. Like his crush and him being in an apocalyptic world together, solely depending on each other (in their own little world).

Which is funny cause I feel like lots of ppl have had dreams where they were in a game they saw/played and with ppl you know irl too. I’ve even had friends tell me they dreamed that our friend group was in some nightmare settings along with the roles we had lmao.

Dang so many complaints saying the exact same things lmfao. Anyways I love the story. The novel is fun too. I am really glad these comments aren’t on the official site- cause these comments filling the entire section with complaints are the types that get stories cancelled due to their own ideal standards. It’s like little mushroom artist saying they won’t continue cause the readers kept complaining that they didn’t like the art.
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Sure I get ppl can dislike the art, but usually when I don’t like the art that much, I just drop the story or skip it. It’s not like making these critiques on this illegal site will reach the artist or help them. I think people confuse constructive criticism with just plain complaints. Constructive criticism points out the parts that are lacking but also provides GOOD advice (by people who have knowledge of the subject) to improve, like suggesting books or videos the author/artist can learn from. Let’s be real, actual good artists would never trash another artists work. And most of these comments would never seek out the artist directly, to tell them that. The comments are just copy paste whining “the art is trash! The artist is shitty!!” Those specific ppl are like bots.
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If you wanna claim yourself as doing a good deed and just giving constructive criticism, you gotta include knowledge of how to improve as well, not just comments of how bad you think the art is. (Not that the artist would see this). Anyways artists all start from somewhere. Not every artist is the highest professional. So many mainstream artists like Pearl boy, k’s secret, etc. started out with lacking art but improved DURING the story. That’s the one thing I hate about specific readers expecting every manhwa artist to be perfect. Y’all’s mindsets are skewed.

Unfortunately this isn’t one of those revenge stories and this will most likely have the FL end up with that scum. I’ve read so many manhua plots like this and have never seen an ending that isn’t the case. The only way is if it’s revenge manhua and the caption describes a new guy.

This guy is pathetic and deserves to be in the line up of the depths of hell.
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What’s even more sad, is that this isn’t even the worst ML from a manhua I’ve seen. There’s this one manhua where the ML approaches FL to use her for his first love’s sake. He seduces her, makes her think he’s in love, impregnates her, steals the child from her womb, uses part of the child’s bone to save his first love, tells the FL her child died at birth, raises (more like he neglects) the son making the son think his mother is his first love. All the while the stepmom/first love abuses the kid. And he also had the audacity to act smug when he sees the FL years later, looking down on her and acting like he did nothing- yet again trying to hook up with her as a side chick with no remorse. And add onto the fact that the FL is a dumbass who chooses him AGAIN. She chooses him over the 2nd ML (which is also a bad guy, but he’s the lesser evil), with the reason that 2nd ML is a liar and also that she loves the ML.

Yup

Yall I’ll say this for new readers. Manhua takes their revenge stories serious lmao. They definitely go into the aspect that karma will be given back exactly how the antagonists did it. That includes the worst situations. Straight manhua doesn’t give af, they are merciless LOL.

(Although BL revenge stories are probably a step higher than that,,they also don’t hesitate to show torture scenes in full. And then even further than that is the darkest manga revenge stories. (Actual dark stories that include gore and explicit torture as karma for the evil antagonists. No romance, straight up getting vengeance the entire time. To the point you’d think the person seeking revenge is a demon sending them to the underworld lmfao)).

“I want na haesoo to HAVE ME. I want her to pick me up and take me away. Always keep me somewhere your eyes can reach, cherish me.”

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It hits different when the man says something along the lines of “I’m yours.” Instead of “she’s mine!” Those lines are usually reserved for thinking of the FL, like “I want to take her away, I want to cherish her,” but I honestly think it’s real cute that he puts himself in that position instead.

Went from one psycho to another.
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Yknow when FL started her next life and sort of got on better terms with cesare, I actually was chill and thought AT MOST they can be friends. (Though it’s clear FL’s trauma will never go away when facing him). But with how cesare continues to reveal himself to be the same terrible person with terrible intentions, that hope is long gone. He literally proved her words: “you only care about your own feelings.” If he were to TRULY change, he would let her go and respect her feelings, settling to at least stand by her side as a friend. But he can’t stand not having her.

It doesn’t help, knowing the nasty ahh spoiler he does later.

chocobuun created a topic of The Sword-Bearing Flower

Usually there’s readers who are thirsty for a rare long haired ML, but it seems the wrong audience reached this story lmao

chocobuun created a topic of Uruwashi no Yoi no Tsuki

This is the one thing I can’t stand about specific readers who strictly read shoujo or green flag ML stories. Such people have insanely high standards to the point it’s toxic, thinking the ML must be perfect, have no flaws, and should never be upset or make the FL/readers upset even a little bit. (They did this to yamada-kun manga too. He was the perfect bf for nearly all of the story but one single action he unknowingly does, and ppl call him toxic??) Their brains are so small, they can’t comprehend anything besides their anger. The fact that the ML is ALSO a teenager who is dealing with a huge decision to move to a new country. Which by the way, majority of normal kids don’t have any say in whether they want to move with their parents. Those that do, either are very lucky or have the privilege to choose. I’m also speaking from experience because I had to move nearly every school year due to my parents job, and had no say cause I was just a child.

People are saying, “oh the ML doesn’t do anything!” Bffr. He’s the one that initiated things in their relationship 98 percent of the time. And the two percent is FL getting a boost of confidence either on her own or had to be persuaded by ppl around her. The whole reason they’re even together now is cause he pursued her. Yall forget they even had to do a trial relationship for FL to say yes. Even in the latest chapter she had to be convinced by a friend. Anyways they’re both teens who are still immature and have normal emotions, make stupid decisions/mindsets, and will make mistakes. I’m more side-eyeing those adult readers who still have such extreme standards and don’t use their brains.

Huh

So I checked out the novel spoilers and it says after the time skip, FL is 20 and ML is 23. So the age gap is only 3 years?! Here I thought it was bigger.

Also what’s interesting is that it looks like they swapped Valentin’s hair and the FL’s hair. In the novel, Valentin has a side part, looking like the hair FL has in the manhwa. In the novel, FL has straight bangs, looking like the hair Valentin has in the manhwa. I wonder why they swapped it.

I’m surprised that ppl use this site and don’t know how it works. Yall complain that someone is uploading the wrong chapters. But NO ONE uploaded it. It’s not a real person. It’s a BOT. This site uses bots that automatically take chapters of stories from other sites onto here. You can see if a real person actually uploaded a chapter by looking at the right of the chapter number. If there’s a yellow username, that’s when it was uploaded directly by a real person. If there’s no name, it’s bots that uploaded it. This is the reason why uploaders make placeholder chapters to prevent bots from automatically uploaded bad mtl or incorrect chapters.

chocobuun created a topic of Deep Love - Host
Nah

Bros gotta be cursed BY THE AUTHOR. Ain’t no way everyone he meets DIES.

chocobuun created a topic of Ang Ang

People thinking it’s a rushed ending, and I can see that- but let’s be fr, there wasn’t any particular important plot going on for the later half of the story. The initial plot of MC getting hired as a bodyguard due to ML’s stalker, finished earlier, so from then on, it was basically just filler chapters of their daily life as a couple. I think it was gonna feel abrupt regardless because there wasn’t really much of an end goal to perfectly stop at. There’s a ton of BLs where the ending is like “mc and ml walk hand in hand down a sidewalk smiling at each other, or just spend the day at home together, the end.” And most ppl will always think those kinds of endings are rushed because it’s too casual.

The only times ppl feel like it’s a complete or fine ending is:
1) it ends where the story finally resolves the main conflict, like defeating an enemy or resolving a mystery.

2) the couple gets married and/or has a child.

chocobuun created a topic of Only Hope

Nahhh please no more sexual scene between the dad and the red bitch. Red bitch seriously needs to be socked in the throat. She’s a rapist psycho

chocobuun created a topic of One room TA

I NEED Eunho and isak together bro. Bratty x bratty.
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(Bonus: throw seungbeom in the mix and make them a throuple and I’d be happy with that too)

Just started reading and I see ppl being upset that FL chose the ML over the nice 2nd ML. But I honestly am pretty chill with that choice. She’s proactive in what she wants.

Anyways the 2nd ML is cute, but I think it’d be better for him to end up with someone else that will mutually love him. I see in chapter 32 a chance encounter with a pretty lady hopefully
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chocobuun created a topic of Between Two Floors

Blondie is actually insufferable. She NEEDS to get kicked in the throat fr.
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You’d think maybe just maybe, the mom of FL was groomed by the father of ML to end up this way- BUT NO. The mom is WEIRD. There’s a scene where she jokingly asks how FL’s body is and literally puts her hands up FL’s shirt to touch her boobs. And also there’s the hints of the mom neglecting FL. The fact that FL has shoes and a backpack of an elementary schooler style, and only owns two pairs of shoes. Whereas the mom wears designer clothes and brand heels.

chocobuun created a topic of Love in Hell

YUHH another red flag bottom x red flag top
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I’m loving the increase in the equally crazy/toxic couple stories lol. This is like the 3rd one I’ve seen (though different levels of red flag).

Ngl though this is giving me flashbacks to killing stalking, so I’m kinda scared lmao

chocobuun created a topic of Gu Chan & ji-ah
YUH

OMGGG same artist/author as Please Show Up. I LOVED that manhwa
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chocobuun created a topic of Seasons of Lovesome

Does anyone remember why they went their separate ways? And what the dude did for her to want to break things off?

Tbh i can see why the brother is overprotective if it’s true that the FL almost died 37 times lmao. Meaning he’s protected her all the time. And maybe it might also be because their mother went missing too. He’s probably scared his remaining family is gonna just be gone

Anyways this is just a quick read if you’re bored. The plot and characters aren’t deep. The relationship between the ML and FL developed super quickly due to them sleeping together. And the reasoning for them liking each other is BOTH shallow- they both liked each other’s beauty at first sight. He’s been obsessed with her just by her looks alone and she just constantly talks about being weak to his looks. The FL as of now, hasn’t shown to be that smart and is just one of those typical heroines that’s just there to experience everything around her without doing much. Honestly for someone who’s supposedly older than everyone else, cause of being transmigrated, she seems the most childish.