Silver Wolf September 29, 2020 7:15 am

I only liked the food....

While the story wasn’t terrible for a newcomer, I found the characters to be a little too one dimensional and there was a lack of depth to the plot... In that one minute the characters would be in trouble and then they would suddenly have a solution.

It wasn’t all bad, the comedy was pretty good and seeing the food did make me salivate a little lol. But I think a little more editing, and more fleshing out of the world, characters and situations would do wonders to improving the story.

I hope the mangaka takes this story and uses it to improve her next one.

    ymi December 6, 2020 2:44 am

    Well written! I agree.

    Silver Wolf December 6, 2020 7:42 am
    Well written! I agree. ymi

    Thank you

Silver Wolf September 26, 2020 4:10 pm

I’m not sure if it was a slight mistranslation or what... but I found the double negatives sooo confusing when they were talking about the smuggling... couldn’t tell if she was saying that people were for it or against it, until they resolved the issue...

Silver Wolf September 17, 2020 8:59 pm

That girl is a b*tch

Silver Wolf September 10, 2020 2:18 am

Is it just me... or is Prince Cecil’s nose a little longer than usual on the last page of chapter 24?

So excited for the chapters to come!

    Maria-chan September 10, 2020 9:55 am

    lmao the prince be turning into pinocchio

    Silver Wolf September 11, 2020 12:59 am
    lmao the prince be turning into pinocchio Maria-chan

    does that mean he’s lying about his love for Tia?!?! (Kidding)

Silver Wolf August 22, 2020 7:26 pm

I love her . Though her name really caught me off guard .


Also Team Magician and/or Knight got the ML. (Prince too typical, and Priest gives more caring older brother vibes)

    MaddEngel August 23, 2020 10:54 am

    Ikr? It's such a masculine name for an elegant elderly lady Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)

    Silver Wolf August 23, 2020 4:39 pm
    Ikr? It's such a masculine name for an elegant elderly lady Σ(  ̄□ ̄||) MaddEngel

    Yep lol. But I looked it up, and at one point it actually was a girls name lol

Silver Wolf August 12, 2020 3:15 am

I have been waiting for this scene for so long! It is one of the funniest things in this series! Plus it is followed by a really sweet scene

Silver Wolf August 8, 2020 12:16 am

Spoiler






I wanted to see what everyone looked like originally in v. 3 ch. 5

Silver Wolf August 4, 2020 12:55 am

Unless he cut her pretty deep, that’s not going to kill her. She’s going to be ver anemic, but not necessarily dead. One could argue that because she’s technically hanging from her wrists, she might bleed out... but honestly I don’t think she actually will.

It’s a misconception that cutting horizontally is the way to do it. To properly slit a person’s wrist, you do it vertically so that the wound can’t be properly sealed (the author actually talked about this earlier on at the beginning of the story).

    Girlga September 1, 2020 1:09 pm

    Anything can be dangerous in a pregnancy, even being anemic could potentially have reapercautions to the baby :/

    Silver Wolf September 2, 2020 5:50 am
    Anything can be dangerous in a pregnancy, even being anemic could potentially have reapercautions to the baby :/ Girlga

    True. But my main point was that it is unlikely that Liv would actually die

    Girlga September 2, 2020 5:58 am

    Considering they are in a place without access to medicine or hospitals anything can be dangerous tho, she is very skinny and smol too, I would worry
    Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)

    Silver Wolf September 2, 2020 6:23 am
    Considering they are in a place without access to medicine or hospitals anything can be dangerous tho, she is very skinny and smol too, I would worry Σ(  ̄□ ̄||) Girlga

Silver Wolf July 26, 2020 8:16 am

I just wanna say... yes they’re 8 years apart in age, but 1. This is set in fantasy/meddle ages era, so their rules on consent are different from ours. 2. Just because they’re 8 years apart in age doesn’t mean they can’t love each other. And 3. Just because they love each other doesn’t mean they’re gonna have sexual relations. Again, this is the Middle Ages and she is the daughter of a noble, sure she has fallen out of favor, but she obviously still has connections; so obviously she would do her best to not upset her family by having sex outside of marriage. All this is to say... cool your jets people! Don’t freak out about the age gap and just enjoy the story for what it is... a story about a lady, who just wants to relax.

Silver Wolf July 17, 2020 6:52 pm

(SPOILER)








If this is what caused Emil to start drinking (or the first trigger), I wouldn’t blame him. That’s a real mind fuck.

    Avenemortum July 17, 2020 10:31 pm

    Woah that's quite the spoiler ( poor emel) thanks for the spoiler btw

    Silver Wolf July 18, 2020 6:57 am
    Woah that's quite the spoiler ( poor emel) thanks for the spoiler btw Avenemortum

    No problem lol

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