
mc described how he was basically a huge heart throb with no romantic struggles. but then rationalizing keeping a kid with the WORST father possible is so funny to me. kill that parasite hoe ?? he had options, and decided to have the devils spawn!! and the only real compliment towards the guy is finding him the most attractive man, but then going through with the most life changing decision is crazy work (btw this is a joke)
do not take this serious… i like the story, their dynamic is magnetic + has so much potential. i looked at this from a realistic lens just for fun. nothing serious or real criticism about the story, the huge appeal to omegaverse besides the sex or die aspect is the babies okay i get it

this chapter was well written for the mere terrifying aspect of relationships between sex workers and clients. even if its intention was only to be goon material- the loud power dynamics and straight up ignorance to non-consensual acts are realistic to a fault
with dan making everything known from his body to his words he doesn’t want this. yet jk thinking he did want it because dan suggested it or enjoyed it during coercion… this is genuinely how a lot of rapists feel or justify their acts. im interested in this story don’t get me wrong, but i view it as more of a horror mockumentary > a romance lmao

this isn’t fanfiction or an indie artist trying to make ends meet. they work under contract, receive stable pay, and are legally protected… it’s NORMAL to discuss the plot, characters, and everything else about the story itself in a negative or positive light? you guys act like ten year olds who’ve never consumed entertainment made for profit
we are supposed to engage with the entire work of fiction, not only praise everything about it. isn’t this common sense by now? or are there too many minors / straight laced naive idiots here

mc seems like a straight self insert. he has all the traits of a fmc who is good at everything, unaware of their beauty, and self deprecating to a fault. he accepts all the hardships of this guild, even though he made it very known from the beginning he wanted an easy life with no harassment from s-class espers
im lost on his characterization tbh, and his love/attraction does feel forced. i was hoping he’d pull away from the guild, knowing he’s not loved or appreciated unconditionally for who he is. but he’s just overly forgiving and welcoming of the difficulties they force on him…

they were having a cutesy lovey dovey moment until that blond bitch walked in!! im fearing for his hole tbh because describing his dick as a SWORD… RUN!! HIS BODY IS NOT THE SAME HE WILL DIE
also the lore drop is fitting into place, that family’s twisted attraction to blond girlish twinks is terrifying. i have a feeling he’ll inform the duke about this pretty fairy

their love and bond is so strong it made yamadera awaken a primal part of himself to save mc?? why can’t they leave this poor old man alone
im scared for the upcoming chapters because i hope he doesn’t accidentally turn blood thirsty. its not easy being a killing machine with the mind of a kid, and then having the hunger/impulse of one
ending the series before the hottest yaoi old man sex scene possible is fucking sick and twisted we got eternally edged and abandoned. my big boobied and moody king was about to give us the riding of the century… how am i supposed to move on peacefully??