The story just moves so...fast. And everything is dealt with so casually. "Oh I have a kid now." "Oh the wolves came back and left again, and oh they found and hunted in a dungeon." "Oh I just quickly made 3 baths instead of one."
It feels like I'm reading a summary of weekly activities in someone's diary rather than a manga story...
Reminds we of a web novel I'm reading that sometimes makes me want to scream "That's it. I'm not reading anymore". Like when a new enemy shows up and it's hard to fight and then this new fighting method is introduced. They thought of it months ago and has been practicing? Funny, you didn't mention that a few chapters ago when you told about how much everyone had improved and how the training was going.
A good story doesn't need pacing this fast. As it'll keep you hooked even if it goes slowly. Stories like The New Gate, or Kumo desu ka?, or Isekai Yakkyoku. Heck stories that go faster can work too if done well. Take RE:Monster, or Choujin Koukousei-tachi.
This is...the bad kind of fast-paced imo. Like the author is just quickly going through the motions. I don't feel any passion from the story, and it all feels like a summary rather than a proper story. Heck, several years have already passed in the manga.
I read a few other stories like kumo already for my long reads but sometimes you're curious about some story you run into that's got a few concepts you like but ofc doesnt hit all of the things you want. If it's a short read and you got time to kill, might as well take a peak and see if they've got something to rave about yet lol
I quite like this manhua, but I have to say the world is kinda inconsistent. I just started rereading from the beginning, and in chapter 8 it's mentioned that alchemists (not going to deal with the word used in the manhua. :P) are supposed to be feared and respected. That even royal families wouldn't dare offend a high class alchemist. Yet Xiao Yan is definitely at that level by now, being able to make tier 7 pills and the like. And others still constantly say he's trash.
Furthermore it was also said that in the entire country there were only tens of alchemists. Yet it feels like Xiao Yan alone already encountered more than that by now. Like at the academy, there was an entire club filled with lower ranked alchemists.
Sure, I get that the MC needs obstacles to overcome, but in that case the author shouldn't have set up how "respected/feared" and "rare" alchemists are supposed to be. He could have just made it so it's hard to become one, but not rare
mmm I think you make sense but at the same time you are taking things too literally... lets keep calling them "alchemists" lol there might seem like there are a lot of them but there are not really, his master was the last "great alchemist" and the rest cant be considered "pros", maybe the last apprentice of his master, and under him some of his teachers... but not even them completely succeeded, is like with practitioners... there are a lot of them learning martial arts techniques and you can call them "martial artists" but that doesnt mean they are the same as those who get "respect"
Then just take a loot at the earlier chapters, when that first green haired alchemist showed up to financially ruin Xiao Yan's family. He was a mere 1 star alchemist that could make basic powders, not even proper pills. Yet he was already being treated like royalty. It's always other alchemists that get treated with great respect or fear, but never Xiao Yan. He's always "trash" or a "nobody". Yet he can create 7th grade or higher pills now. An alchemist that even elders of major, hugely rich and powerful families should desperately seek to make friends with. But once again, except when it's Xiao Yan...
but that's the point, you could be the most powerful guy in the world but if no one knows about your strength then you won't get the proper recognition, if he wanted to be recognized he should have stayed in school, keep going for competitions and obtain a proper "title", he doesnt have the reputation he deserves because he never achieved it
Magic: The gathering (the card game) is about powerful summoners getting mana from the land (the lands you play) to summon creatures to fight for them. I really don't see the connection with this manga. So why is it called Magic: The gathering? O.o
https://magic.wizards.com/en/story/planeswalkers/chandra-nalaar
Because it is entirely based off of MtG. Chandra is a Planeswalker. The spells mentioned are all cards as well.
I find it very interesting how the people from the visual novel have changed now that it's world has become real. The main love interest prince turned out to be naive and clueless, wasting away the country's money and going along with whatever stupid thing Yuuri comes up with or wants. Yuuri turned out to be a naive and spoiled brat whom just wants to throw money around, not even thinking of the consequences. The "brother" of Iris turned out to be blinded by a love he can't have, making him lose sight of everything important. And so on.
It's definitely one of the more unique isekai stories and I'm very glad that it was picked up again by the translators. :)
This person (this persons?) lacks any logic... As soon as "she" woke up "she" should have just quickly explained that the "guy" was "her" twin brother or something.
If this was me, I would have gotten pretty damn angry at the people "rescuing" the female me, yelling at them that they had attacked my "twin brother", whom was just trying to help, and demanding that they find him as soon as possible.
Well, if their symbiotic control is re-functioning now that she's up then they might be partially aware of what's going on with each other still. And since by then he was already learning to be a warrior they may have decided to leave it rather than unnecessarily interrupting his training. And deal with the issue when they decide to re-meet.
I disagree with you on one point, the female side could've still explained that it was her twin trying to help her. It's really stupid to just agree and make the male side a criminal. Because that makes meeting up much harder. As soon as he enters the city or meets anyone that saw him "attack" the female side, he'll be regarded as a pervert and criminal and end up being attacked. Then even if they do meet up, they'll have to explain everything as well as explain the reason the female side told them she was attacked when now they're saying that they are siblings. It's better to deal with things straightforwardly then leave it be, creating misunderstandings and trouble.
Let's also not forget about the absurdly stupid logic of the guy that attacked. "A young man is holding an unconscious young woman! He must be a pervert and a criminal!" I mean really? That's the first thought you have when you see a situation like that, and you decide to immediately attack and try to kill the guy?











THANK YOU! Finally a manhua where the MC, after getting powerful, GETS TO SHOW OFF THAT POWER. No "Oh noes a stronger enemy arrived! I'm weak compared to him!" No "You're already far above what was considered powerful at the start of the manga but you're still trash!" Instead he invaded a prince's castle with ease, beat the crap out of him and his underling, and made the prince take him to his friend! Finally a manhua that does this!
Sure, I bet he will find more powerful opponents later on. But manhua like this get way too predictable if all that happens is "I beat this guy who was stronger than me when I was weak, but a stronger opponent is here and I'm weak again!" on an endless cycle. Martial arts manhua need moments like these too!