Coco June 18, 2024 7:29 am

although i love this artist's art and characters design, many parts are unclear. for example the politic can be confusing, a lot of dialogue are too cryptics, and the movements/action aren't detailed. ps. also the gender of the characters (this one is probably me problem lol)

it's definitely clearer in novel narrative. for example in the latest chapter (ch 64) sion quickly went to hide in a small secret room because of they afraid the ruckus/noise was really dangerous. in this webtoon, they suddenly just in the small room when parvel returned. the movements and motive isn't explained well.
sure you can guess what happened, but isn't it taxing to always have to infer/guess everything.

some details can be omitted, but this scene is quite precious, i think it's better to take more time at the pacing and the flowing. recently this feel quick

    Miharu Amami June 18, 2024 10:18 am

    hello! may i know where we can read the novel?
    thank you for your intake so we can have a better understanding with this chapter!!(⌒▽⌒)

    Coco June 18, 2024 11:20 am

    sorry i don't keep the bookmark, it has been a while as well, so the site might have been closed (due to piracy) but if you scroll down on the comment you can see a lot of link shared. or you can copy the korean title and look it up on google. oh i read it via mtl, there's no completed english translation yet

    Miharu Amami June 18, 2024 3:54 pm
    sorry i don't keep the bookmark, it has been a while as well, so the site might have been closed (due to piracy) but if you scroll down on the comment you can see a lot of link shared. or you can copy the korea... Coco

    i see.. i actually have a love-hate relationship with mtl translation but i think i probably will look for it later.. who knows
    thank you again for the information!!

    Coco June 18, 2024 5:38 pm
    i see.. i actually have a love-hate relationship with mtl translation but i think i probably will look for it later.. who knows thank you again for the information!! Miharu Amami

    no problem. if it already has english translation you would already have found it yourself. there's no secret site for english translations

    Miharu Amami June 19, 2024 12:36 am
    no problem. if it already has english translation you would already have found it yourself. there's no secret site for english translations Coco

    true to that ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    CathyBLover July 1, 2024 8:30 am

    I personally like the fact that you have to deduce and use your own head. It feels more mysterious and a realistic take on trying to understand others' actions, like in real life you can't read others' thoughts to know why they do what they do. But I do find it generally easy to understand what they're implying like this chapter's "hiding after loud noices".

    Coco July 1, 2024 4:13 pm
    I personally like the fact that you have to deduce and use your own head. It feels more mysterious and a realistic take on trying to understand others' actions, like in real life you can't read others' thoughts... CathyBLover

    if it's done well it's good. this is the artist first time doing adaptation. i didn't ask for everything to be spoon feed, but sometimes it's like having a scene cut out of the picture (not the censorship).

Coco June 14, 2024 1:58 pm

hm hm so half brother. although there's still some doubt, i see no reason to lie about it. they do look alike. and it seems author really intend to write story about parents figure-child relationship. although jing mo's current body isn't blood-related it's still taboo if they enter relationship.

i know some stories just have bl vibe or teasing relationship but never explicitly stated that the characters are together for some reasons, i wonder whether this story will be like that or this might be not even bl to begin with.

if they actually have never been blood related at all, they still have the parent-child power balance.

however i can also see them as couple and it feel like it will happen eventually and naturally. their age aren't much different, they keep thinking of each other, have complex towards each other, and sometimes it feels like there are only two people in the world. obviously author must have intended to make it like that right?

so even if it's technically and morally taboo i dont feel much resistance for now. beside i also dig taboo relationship like master-disciple so half-brothers doesn't feel that weird

    Coco August 13, 2024 5:40 pm

    alright author, their conflict as parents-child are too deep. if it's resolved can't they just stay as brother and not lover?

    it's not about taboo or not, it's just cheating to not make them an example of how parent-child should be. but by the hints, yeah i know.

    maaan this make me feel really conflicted.

    also the art worsened as usual. sigh I still grateful author keep writing at all

    Fujoshi_Mom August 23, 2024 12:26 am

    I thought jing mo and his bro are not real brothers but only adopted by the master?

    Jeon-Cookies March 18, 2025 4:57 pm

    They're def a couple. The art style says so

    Coco March 19, 2025 7:54 am
    I thought jing mo and his bro are not real brothers but only adopted by the master? Fujoshi_Mom

    it was told in the story, jing mo was taken by the master because he was the half brother left behind by one of the parents before they died.. but half his heritage is demon, so half brother.
    the only think i can think of is jing mo actually a friend's son left to the parents instead so it won't be counted as incest. Or it's not incest because jing mo was reborn in a puppet body thus they no longer blood related. I prefer the first case.

    Coco March 19, 2025 8:03 am
    They're def a couple. The art style says so Jeon-Cookies

    feel like all hints led to that. actually i dont mind incest much in bl story, it's just weirdly strong in this one. i am more afraid other readers that do not notice at first going to complaints about it later and then this story is not going to be completed translated/finished... thats why i keep bringing it up that they're brothers, parent-child etc.

    i mean come on, one more bl work i wont be able to finish, i will lost trust in manhwa translators commitment in general

Coco June 12, 2024 12:49 am

sisterhood! sisterhood! so cute~

Coco May 19, 2024 6:35 pm

i like the plot but i wish they have just a bit of optimistic view so they won't be so depressed, i feel so bad for them. fortunately the ending is optimistic although it's a bit sudden

Coco May 16, 2024 10:07 pm

petition for snake to be a grimm reaper!

i dont remember how grimm reaper is made but i wish there's a real resurrection in this world!!

    LadyRaven May 16, 2024 11:12 pm

    sighhh you get a shinigami if they die from suicide only iirc

    Coco May 17, 2024 3:09 am
    sighhh you get a shinigami if they die from suicide only iirc LadyRaven

    ┗( T﹏T )┛

Coco May 16, 2024 10:48 am

I love the perfect Un
I also love the flawed Un

Coco May 10, 2024 6:09 am

i am bawling my eyes bwahaha

Coco April 29, 2024 4:59 am

whatever people say i like this story.
(spoiler)

the suffering aren't prolonged or stretched out like in other angsty bl. both mc and ml aren't scum. i think the misunderstanding are quickly resolved. and i felt a bit relatable how hard it is to have mental problem and the only one you can rely or want to be with also not in a good space. it's not fking easy to go meet a therapist... at least han sekye didn't have financial issue. yijun isn't a doormat either, he's just loved sekye too much. he knew how to stand up to himself. believe me it took so much courage to cut off relationship either with your beloved lover or parents. sekye did bad for trying to manipulate yijun before and selling pity, which is again relatable, but kudos for yijun for seeing through him and didn't fall for it. idk why, i do want yijun to be happy. but sekye need him so much and i truly believe he could change. i just have very soft spot towards people with mental illness.
lastly i dont think this is too slow or too fast.

Coco April 13, 2024 6:33 am

did my memory wrong me??
I didn't remember that
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nangong que'er is originally male

    Flor de Ana April 13, 2024 7:06 pm

    So that's why San Lu was mistaking Que'er for a guy. Turns out he wasn’t wrong

Coco April 12, 2024 8:22 am

i only know flowing cloud sect junior brother for a short time but he's a good child!! now his senior brother saw his corpse which looks brutal... it's too sad

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